by vt_ice123
Badly written. I couldn't finish reading because of the plethora of mistakes therein.
Great story! Hope they will be together forever, getting married and having a family.
love it..very hot the start of older young encounter
more tocome i hope
thanks
Try to realise that there are dozens, if not hundreds of excellent adjectives to describe that someone appreciates a thing or person than just "love, loves or loved." This strikes me as the writing or a 4th or 5th-grade student.
The story was light, breezy, short and uncomplicated. Plus it delved into analingus. My favorite.
Good work!
I loved this story. It was erotic, romantic, and brought you into Megan's 18 year old world of emotions. I like your writing style and hope to read the next chapter!