All Comments on 'Meghan, A Love Story'

Sweet story, but I wasn't totally on board because of the age difference. I still gave you a 4/5.

is this a part one?

Wow what a cliffhanger. I hope there is so much more of this story to come yet. For your first submission you have done very well thank you. I am enjoying this story and hope you keep writing.

really like the fact you did not give Meggie HUGE tities

More!

Only one problem so far. The phrase is not "Uncle Sam's Mistreated Children". It's "Uncle Sam's Misguided Children". I am retired military, and I have many Marine friends, so I know the saying well. Other than that, it is a very nice build-up. Can't wait for the next part.

Love this story. Please follow up with a sequel.

Nice! Please let there be more.

Great story screwed up by rushing the ending!

Jack should have a very sexy hairy chest with which he can tease Meg!

Definitely anticipating more of this.

Different interpretations depending on points of view and clinical experience.

I had no intention of writing a sequel, but I will give it some thought.

Thank you all for the kind words.

I joined the Marines the day I turned eighteen

My 21 years in the Corps left me with a good education

In a year or so I had sold

Meghan was a teenage boy's wet dream, and my 39-year-old cock

So how old was he when he got the new cock?

I know I'm anal but can you add.

Other than that not bad but things like that jump out at me and put me off...

WTH? "I had no intention of writing a sequel." Why write it at all if you leave us hanging? As former military, I'll confirm that marines are sufficiently mentally corrupted to screw not only their sister but small farm animals, old ladies, and anything else with a warm, wet hole. LOL! That said, setting it up with a 39 year old step brother and 18 year old step sister was overly constricting for luring us in. There were several other plot lines you could have pursued and not boxed your self into a scenario that hard to believe. 4*

Some what of a good story idea but, what 18yo wouldn't be thrilled to have a house to themselves, if she was that flirtatious n open to walking around naked then I doubt she had never touched a dick before, plus he also slept with his stepmom previously?

I agree with the others that things got rushed in the end n after so much build up there is no sex except a lil kissing n groping? Why not write more before releasing the story? I have a lot more ?s about the whole story in general, the best I could give u is 3 stars

Fantastic, please keep going

A beautiful adventure of love and lust

Will there be more?

Well written and a good build up to a loving climax.

Ok...you GOTTA finish this!!!