All Comments on 'Meimei Pt. 01'

This was a wonderful beginning to the story. I cannot wait to read more!

I enjoyed the story very much. And I will eagerly read the next part when it comes out.

I judge the writing by how well I can see the images you describe in my mind as I read. This story made it very easy to see the scenes. Well done.

I hope the next part will be similar that way.

The Chinese stuff was okay I guess. Not sure it added much. What a tease, but a really good tease.

Really well-written!

Well done. The relationship between the two had been building for years and has become one of mutual love and respect. Looking forward to part two.

This piece is a smoldering ember meandering towards a overflowing tinderbox. I eagerly await part 2.

A creative story complete with foreign vocabulary. The Chinese dialog didn't over power the story like I thought it might. Very curious with the unspoken desires but glad we are getting to it in chapter 2. Overall, well done.

Very nice. Loved the build up. I think mama knows something is up. Seemed to be proving a point to Shan of how strange it is to watch her bro work out. On to ch.2!