All Comments on 'Meimei Pt. 02'

Man I was pissed at her until we got her side of it. Great job especially that titfucking scene. hot.

Surprising that the female protag didn't fuck a bunch of guys after the "conflict" as usual

Thank you, dear author, for sharing your gift of storytelling.

What's the oft-heard expression, "I guess you had to be there." That's rather how I feel after having read this story. As a Caucasian with only incidental knowledge of Chinese – or other Occidental – customs, the concept of honour is "foreign" to me and, I fear, so much of the western world's population. Hence, the conflicts experienced by your protagonists only became comprehensible as the dialogue unfolded. My feeling of being jarred at the reversals (An Shan's rage, for example, when JD asks for clarification) was, perhaps, appropriate and in synchrony with the emotions both felt as their relationship unravelled. All of that aside, I enjoyed the story immensely; in part because of its unusual premise, but also for the empathy I felt for all four of the fully-developed characters, Many thanks for a wonderful read. 5 stars and a favourite rating.

The whole "drop you head first into a bunch of language and cultural barriers thing" seemed contrived, and frankly a reduction in the potential heat level of this story. I don't know why race is such a huge component in some many stories on this site. The eroticism comes from motivations and behaviors, not skin tone or accent. I would have rated it a lot higher without constantly being thrown out of the immersion by the clinic the author tried to put on with respect to a particular culture.

Fantastic, love this story to bits and want to read what happens from here please.

A very well written love story. the plot was well laid out and flowed nicely. It was interesting blending the German boy with the oriental family. There was never a hint of what the second part would entail. I thought the mothers traditions were interesting. Lastly, I love happy endings.

Very well done! Bravo! Please give yourself a thunderous amount of oats on the back for this! I read both stories and have to say, this is by far, one of my top 3 stories I have EVER read on Lit... included my own!! It ebbed, it closed, it had great characters, great story, great emotional depth and an awesome ending. It wasn't a quick in and out. Nor a meandering ramble. While I cannot speak knowingly of the different cultural differences; they seemed nonetheless well thought out and explained. You have a new fan for life if the rest of your offerings are this good! 5 stars easily! And that's ONLY because you can't have more!!!

Really great story with strong descriptions, painful character development, and illuminating sex scenes. I appreciate the love and family devotion showed by the family and their traditions. Definitely looking forward to a next installment. 5/5

Fantastic! Thank you. Thank you especially for sharing, describing her beauty, her spirit, your thoughts and feelings. It is an intensely beautiful story.

I actually surprisingly enjoyed this story a lot, the erotica was well-written for the most part, and the attempt at Chinese was at least respectable. However, as I got to the last part here (with the strange ritual), I had to do a double take. Being Chinese with some knowledge of Taiwan as well, the strange turn to exoticism knocked me out of immersion and everything ground to a halt. It's probably obvious to most people that the ritual is a work of fiction, but with everything else matching up relatively well with a "Chinese family", this was really quite jarring. Still, credit where it's due, the story was overall fine.

Totally awesome! Parts 1 and 2 together - almost unbelievable quality for Literotica. Not only your command of Chinese, but the smooth way you wove it into the narrative is impressive; it always strengthened, never slowed, the story. The characters are believable and appealing. Your knowledge of relationships, adoption dynamics (I know!), cultural dynamics - all are impressive. And the writing is engaging - like, hard to put down. One of the best I've read in Literotica. Excellently done! Thank you.

What a wonderful story.

Meimei... was such a wonderful story of love. You are soo talented and I sincerely hope you are publishing somewhere else that can reward you monetarily. You deserve that.

Loved everything about this story. Except the end. Everything was so believable and innocent. Not the ridiculously unrealistic crap many write about. (maybe the anal was a bit unlikely) but that ritual at the end pulled me completely out the story. It was uncomfortable, weird and not at all sexy.

However, the rest of both chapters was excellent and I really enjoyed it overall.

soooo good

What a wonderful story.

Amazing story. Not gonna lie, I was kinda hoping mama might take him in her mouth for a minute lol. Very well done.