All Comments on 'Melanie's Miscalculation'

Very well written story. Full of humour, fun, and sex. Shows the joy and mutual pleasure of great sex with trusting partners.

OMG Daphne!! You're the best!! At first I was like...damn it's hell long. But then you had me eager from the very beginning. Loved how the guys got their fantasies fulfilled and yet treated her very well. And the suspense at the end...it was the cherry on top of an 8 layered icecream sundae ;) Love all your stories. Big fan ❤️

Ace story, well written .

Will be checking out your others.

Great story. Liked the twist. Would love to see more of Mels and the boys (or just Mels :) )

Fun and funny story - you're an excellent author!

Vary nice story, I enjoyed reading, looking forward to reading more from you. Keep up the awesome writing.

Great story! Love Mel andthe guys. Great writing, can't wait to read more

Awesome story and excellently written! Thanks for a great read!

Amazing story. I'd rate 5/5 if the ratings were available.

Love the twist at the end

Loved it! It had me wet and swollen the entire time I read it.

I've been reading stories on this website for almost 15 years. This is one of the best I've ever read.

@NaughtyIrishGirl - Aww thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. - xoxo Daphne

Okay so this was actually so cute and wholesome! I kinda want a cute spinoff where they just hang out and go on cute dates!

I love this. Cute, sexy, and respectful.

This needs a 5, many times over.

Great!

One of the best erotica I've ever read (especially as a band kid), and was kinda hoping there'd be some paizuri or boob stuff ig. Wonderful story tho.

Interesting concept. Story well told. Good technical detail