All Comments on 'Melanie's Story Pt. 01'

Usual high standard, Shaima. Keep it up. Looking forward to the next part.

...the previous poster said. More please and thanks.

You've definitely got a distinctive style yet your characters read as completely different people - great work, I have to pace myself when I see you've posted something and make sure I still do what needs to be done before the reward of reading!

I really liked this. I'm glad there's three more chapters, but for now I need to sleep.

Nothing new so far...

It’s interesting the path that life leads you down, you never know what is around the corner but I like the way you have met the challenges head on.