All Comments on 'Melanie's Story Pt. 02'

by Shaima32

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MaonaighMaonaighabout 7 years ago
Spot on

I've known quite a lot of alcoholics in my lifetime and everything in this story is spot on. Looking forward to see how this develops.

CelticTravelerCelticTravelerabout 7 years ago
Great character development

Very much enjoying this story. Mother was the alcoholic in my life.. Dad sober. Your story is a great glimpse into the story behind the labels. Looking forward to the next installment.

DRock

jenorma2012jenorma2012about 7 years ago
5 stars

I don't give 5 stars to many stories, but this one is well worth it, and I can't wait to find out what happened to Jeff did he stay sober, or go back to his old ways

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
So good!

What brilliant story! Can't wait for the next instalment! Your stories have great character development and I love the slow burn. I like a quick fix as much as the next gal, but love and romance is what truly floats my boat! Thanks so much!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
great as allways

Hey... well we all know what happens to Jeff and Mel , but it's more about the journey than the destination ( as any motorbike rider would know ). And the journey you take us on is f-ing great. Pity I can't pick you up on little technicalities like Manly trains here to keep you from Goddess status....a remark I suppose is odd coming from the straight guy....thank you for writing and sharing your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

I love this series.

okami1061okami1061almost 2 years ago

Still, nothing much new...

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