All Comments on 'Melisa, A Daughters Infatuation'

Just a total lack of credibility, nothing new, could just have been a cut and paste from half a dozen other stories.

Damn that was great. I could easily picture her getting dressed. The seduction was incredibly well done. Had me raging hard by the time her panties came off. This was lovemaking not monkey fucking like a lot of other trash dad/daughter stories. I believe this is the first I've read of you author. I will read the others. Magnificent.

3 stars

DragonRider55

I stopped right there.

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A first sentence is important. It can set the tone of the story. It can indicate whether or not the writer put an real effort into the story.

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You posted it as one sentence. You posted it as one long, drawn out, run-on sentence. You started your story with a sentence that should embarrass anyone past the age of 10.

Made my cock throb and wish i had a daughter to fuck.

Hope there is more

I normally don't read Father-Daughter stories but this one was with a lot of love, that his daughter loves him and they both mutually wanted to act on something and share it. That she and her Dad took it one step at a time and made it a loving event, not just screwing each other - it was love filled and she wanted this for years and her Dad finally gave in. I hope there is a part two so we will now how much she drained him overnight and how he felt after. Very good and thank you.

Exactly what I want to do to my Dad Rick. I'm stacy18_bi at Hotmail. Hit me up