by away443
I'm still shaking my head. I was waiting for some kind of explanation on what the chick was up to or what her scam was but it never came. So I just have to shake my head and ask WTF?
Did a part of it get left off? Because as it sits, it makes no sense whatsoever. No stars because there really isn't a story here.
Original, imaginative, well-written... and strangely quite erotic. I really liked Melissa's erratic and unpredictable behavior, and can imagine how that would fuel the sexuality when she confronts him in the end.
Other reviewers: It's supposed to have a WTF ending. If you've never had WTF sexual experiences as bizarre as this, you've sadly missed out.
Most likely a true story. I also had my share of situations with crazy bitches. In the beginning they are loving; that is until they have a man suckered in; then their plan of entrapment begins. They are cold; cruel and calculating, dominating man-eaters; making a man feel sub-human.
The key to the story is; Mel taking off her bra and panties, then forcing the guy to jack-off into the bra and panties; after which Mel again wore the bra and panties. Mel got exactly what she wanted; while degrading the guy to no end causing him a never ending grief. The world is full of sick women like Mel.
This was just a great story. well written, and interesting. Too bad you couldn't have went further with it. I was so hoping that you didn't end it where you did. I really wish that you at least written a sequel to it that's how good I thought it was.
Only a woman could write something like this. I loved it!
Time for part 2! His inner Dom needs to come out. I want to read your description of the events to follow.