All Comments on 'Melody For A New Day'

Great sequel to the original story!

5

Nicely written. I was curious if there was going to be more on the first one.

Great story telling and a nice segue from the previous chapter. PLEASE don't make us wait another 2 1/2 yrs for the next instalment..

Great 2nd chapter. Looking forward to the final segment. The characters really developed in this chapter.

Wow, that had some wild twist I did not see coming. You always entertain your readers.

Good story. Just didn’t hit me the same way as as some of your other sequels. I didn’t feel as invested and can’t explain why. The writing was still top notch though

Enjoyed this "change of pace"...and am looking forward to part three!!!

For me, this was another 5-star part of a very engaging story. The twist revealed in Linda's job situation was well-written, as is the angst for her husband in dealing with her history.

I really hope this story isn’t going to become an orgy-focussed tale of multiple sex parties in an always-growing circle of partners, as I think it would cheapen the story that began with such great promise... but I don't think that's your style.

I'm hanging in and hanging on for the rest of the tale with bated breath...

Excellent 2nd chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter and see where Melody takes us.

Awesome story, please don’t make us wait 3 years for the final chapter.

I took your advice and re-read the original, and have now read this follow-up.

You have a deft hand with the relationships, showing the attraction, the development, the difficulties, and a resolution.

Looking forward to the promised 3rd installment.

Excellent ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

As usual you write a really good tale, although as another said, please don't make us wait years for the conclusion :)

Wonderful story!! When will third part be out?

I love all your stories, hopefully the next part will not come in years, had to reread the first part. 5 ⭐️ from my side!

I had to go back and reread the previous as I just could not remember it. Unlike your others that are ingrained. A good story and one I am looking foward to reading. As I do with all your work. As others have said not as good as others but close.

Loved it. BurntRedStone is a fucking genius, second to none her at Literotica. Love your stories. Worthy of 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS!

Yes for the Trilogy! Thanks for the great stories.

Went back to read chapter 1, glad I did. Good story, but not interested in David collecting a harem like Ben is. 5 stars!

Thank you for another wonderful series although I thought that "Melody for a Long Weekend" was a bit long. Until Auden showed up in the series, I thought the series might have been mislabeled as Erotic Coupling instead of First Time. Nevertheless, I'll rate it as 5* due to the strong character development, dialogue, plot twists, and hot sex.

David reminds me of a young Sam Shepherd. While they obviously are different in age and education, they both are BIG men who are talented and considerate lovers who somehow attract a bevy of beauty women...all who are comfortable sharing their beds with each other. I'm wondering if we'll see a series about David and his further adventures after the third episode of Melody is published.

I'm intrigued by Auden. As a breast man, I'm fantasizing about a tall, slim woman with large, natural tits. Perhaps a British version of Tyra Moore. What's not to like!?!?

That said, I'm curious about something regarding Auden. While I realize that this is the fantasy world of Literoticia where anything goes, I'm curious about why a 20 year old woman would be messing around in High School when she is the owner of an international flower shop chain...especially when she is not intending to go on to college on the belief that it won't help her in her business? If she thinks a HS diploma would be helpful, I would think that getting a GED would be much less timely and easier than sitting in class all day and doing what's necessary to earn top grades.

Like many others, I hope that the future release of "Melody for a New Life" will occur sooner rather than later. I wonder if Officer Blane winds up in Melody's bed and new life.

Following nicely in Ben's footsteps! Loved it

Here's hoping part 3 doesn't take another 3 years. I'm running out of time! 😁

In too feel echoes of Ben, but that's not a bad thing! Unlike Ben, David is exactly who and what he was introduced as, a young man who had not found himself yet. Now, there is so much upside that we definitely need more.

I know it’s not your way, but I was hoping that dad would take a step back and let David take care of his mom the way she needs it. For those who are wired that way, life occurs without color unless they are able to reach fulfillment and expression through submission. Consenting adults should be allowed to follow their hearts and find their bliss unimpeded by the stale opinion of outsiders.

~Spiny

I wrote myself a conclusion for this long ago. I'm glad that BR got back to it. BR is probably at his best when he is writing about caring lovers. He added more about how they were feeling than in some of his series, which I liked. BR often focuses on unusual sexual pairings. I think he made this story's various relationships to be plausible if improbable. Thanks for continuing to deliver good stories!

I liked it that the timing of Melody's husband's demise makes it plausible she just avoided qualification for "loving wives" category. I also enjoyed very much the writerly craft of efficient disposal of surplus husbands - avoids lots of pointless drama! Reminded me of H. Allen Smith's Rhubarb, where if I recall it right - it's been a while - in the voice of himself the writer he explains that when a character gets inconvenient a writer can always just drop them down a well. Kind of subtly tongue in cheek!

Excellent continuation. Fantastic story. You definitely kept it interesting. Looking forward to the next chapter ....5stars

I liked this section of the story.

But you messed up any catharsis I could have gotten from the resolution between Jackie and her husband by overtly showing David manhandling her and her getting turned on in the presence of her husband.

It makes it seem like either is sexually attracted to her son or she has no control over how her body reacts to being manhandled no matter who does it.

I guess this wasn't what you wanted me to takeaway from your story.

Should have kept it to the massage bit.

You messed up any catharsis I could have gotten by the resolution of the situation between Jackie and her husband by overtly showing David manhandling her in front of his father and her getting turned on by it.

It makes it seem like either she is sexually attracted to her son or would be turned on being treated like so by anyone as if she has no control over her body.

Also her clinginess to her son wasn't clearly explained. I wanted it to be clear because as I hope to God (you the author) that it wasn't some incestuous inclination on her part.

Superbly done as always. Yes I found it,p.10. The fellows name is David not Davis. That was the only error I Noticed. You're proof reading has become so good that I'm sure you put a mistake in just to see if anyone finds it (you're Waldo). Another great story leaving us wanting the next part and more. Anony Mous

WAITING EAGERLY FOR THE SEQUEL, BURNT REDSTONE!

Surprised. Lonely isolated people connecting and finding each other to create an extended family of love and respect. What possibilities? A do over lover, close friends and child? (Manna from heaven?)