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oggbashanoggbashanover 4 years agoAuthor
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I have deleted a comment from a user who does not allow responses or comments on his works. Why should I accept negative remarks from someone who doesn't let other people have the same opportunity?.

WilCox49WilCox49over 4 years ago
Rushed, but very good.

A bit more detail would have been very nice, but this is still a wonderful story. Nothing non-essential; just a little short on feeling, which must be inferred from what happens. Good job, and thank you.

WilCox49WilCox49over 4 years ago
I may not have been clear.

By "nothing non-essential", I meant that everything said in the story was directed to the point you were aiming at. A very good thing. Sorry if that was too brief.

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Can I now change bio? oggbashan was diagnosed as terminally ill and expected to be dead by June 2018. As you can see. I am still here. . As long as I can I will continue writing and posting on Literotica but there will be an end - soon. I don't expect anyone to like ALL of my...