by oggbashan
I have deleted a comment from a user who does not allow responses or comments on his works. Why should I accept negative remarks from someone who doesn't let other people have the same opportunity?.
A bit more detail would have been very nice, but this is still a wonderful story. Nothing non-essential; just a little short on feeling, which must be inferred from what happens. Good job, and thank you.
By "nothing non-essential", I meant that everything said in the story was directed to the point you were aiming at. A very good thing. Sorry if that was too brief.