by miss_D_mena
Dr beulahthebrit; Brilliant, absolutely brilliant, my parents are `baby-boomers' and came from the east-end, Stratford, to be precise and would tell me of walking to school through bomb-sites. How poor most people were and how neighbours helped each other. Now, I will admit, they have never told me in detail the sexual going's on, but there are at times `Oh, remember so and so, or miss W and her various lady friends'. I would love to be able to get inside their heads and know the truth, but I think you story is pretty close to what went on. 5 stars, of course, but really it should be more
Very well written story, lovely and heartfelt, real shame about Lucy, but that’s what happens in life, nice that he ended up with his first love
I really don't understand why fucking a grandma is erotic, when there are something on the order of 3billion younger, healthier, more attractive women on the planet for a young man to enjoy.
Great story. Well written and the balance between sex and everything else was perfect for me. Well done.
Excellent portrayal of the love of mature ladies. As a young lad at school in the late 1950's wholehearted with you in your story. I got an American friend of mine to write my story, although he didn't quite touch the sentiment that I felt. You can read it see "Memories of Mum" congratulations, well done.
Very very good writing and very well written a true love story and shows how age really doesn’t matter. Also shows how times have changed and not for the better. Keep writing.
Well, with all due respect he shouldn't have apologized to his mother for putting her in her place.
Truly a touching story. Somewhat parallels my own life as I've had sex with one of my teachers in high school and a couple of married ladies when in junior high and then again while in high school. And I did have the opportunity with my mother when I was in my early 20's but past up on it due to the circumstances, which by the way I've kicked myself in the ass for ever since (God rest her soul). Oh and i was also born shortly after WWII. Those were the good old days.
sweet normally im here for the raw porno but I like to admire and study good writing, Im going to read the rest of your list im sure i will learn something.
From all the comments you seemed to have made an impression. You did with me. I don't give 5's often, but there are exceptions.
As I have come to expect from the best storyteller on literotica , another great tale of true love and romance!!!!
Another great story, there was a lot of emotion and as in most of these stories you write, just that moment of sadness to keep it real. Very nice, thanks for writing.
Well done! Very well done!!!!!! Nothing more needs to be said, one writer to another.
The part of Lucy and her dying of cancer reminds me of my own youth. Gripping and fondly memorable. Truly wonderful story.
Instead of sneaking around, why not discuss it with the wife?? You write very good stories but have a tendency to not end them well, and this could've been one of your best. Not all wives are oblivious to what is happening. Give them some credit.
Critics be damned, this was excellently conceived and written. As they say about books, I couldn't put it down.
I especially admire your descriptions of sex with older women and the technique they tend to appreciate most. For any readers wondering about that, it's absolutely spot on. Miss d'Mena has obviously Been There and Done That.
Other than the excess dot dot dots all over the story, it was an excellent story! 5 BIG ASS FLAMING NOVA STARS!
Riveting story. I must tell you, as an author, you have an amazing gift, an ability to turn written words into emotions that jumps off the page as they are read. Lovely character descriptions and well thought out plots are the norm for your stories that can bring tears to the eyes of the reader, this one being only the latest, I'm sure far from the last. I have, to this point, only just begun to read down your list of entries, trying to leave comments that would, hopefully, encourage you to keep sharing your gift with us, those who have been fortunate enough to find you. 5⭐ doesn't seem to be enough.
Rafe
This is your best story. Completely believable. I may have read it five or six times and not sure how many more times it will be read in the future. Thank you.