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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Over all good story, but when English is not your first language you need to make use of someone to proofread and correct things.

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Reader since 90's, finally started publishing, first in Portuguese (native language) and now in English. Constructive critics are welcome, share with me your thoughts or experiences.