All Comments on 'Memory Ch. 02'

by Gigi_Rose

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ariesgirlariesgirlover 11 years ago

I hope Deacon stay strong against psycho woman. She is a real bitch thats for sure.

sweetjanielsweetjanielover 11 years ago
Awesome

Great story...well written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

what happened to sarah for her to go all bitch mode and think she could take the alphas house. besides wolves mate for life so if they didnt feel the mating pull they couldnt have got married.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Love. Love. Love....

this story, keep it going. Your writing is absolutely amazing and I really hope you continue. Can't wait for the next update. Oh, and why exactly is Sarah angry?

zetagirlzetagirlover 11 years ago
love this story

I can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
please dont...

dont take too long giving us another chapter. i love this story. you write well. :)

ale1975ale1975over 11 years ago
Yea!

So excited to see this chapter it was worth the wait. But I hope I don't have to wait as long for the next 1. great job

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Loveeee this story

Pleaseeeee update it a little sooner next time if possible

wildsoulwildsoulover 11 years ago

yay!!! I've been waiting for you to update!!!! Thank you.

heycrystalheycrystalover 11 years ago
Really Good

I'm so happy that you updated your story. It's really good. Please keep up the good work.

beastman0969beastman0969over 11 years ago
Great story

WOW I can't wait for the next chapter. Very good story.

mrskelleymrskelleyover 11 years ago
Great!

I like this story!!!! More Please!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

I'm so glad you've updated this story. I can't wait to see where it goes. -DC

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
great story!

What an amazing story!! Skye's pain and hurt are palpable. Can't wait to see if Deacon can help heal her (and vice versa).

LovelyLvsLovelyLvsover 11 years ago
wowwww!

chapter one was good, but chapter two was soo intense! please keep writing!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
please

update i like this story it has so much dept

RedJohnnieRedJohnnieover 11 years ago
One of the best...

I am really loving this story so far, please continue. This is one of the best stories I've read on literotica, you should really consider self-publishing this story I would gladly pay for a digital copy. Continue the excellent work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
WOW!!!

Truly one of the best stories here. You're an exceptional writer. PLEASE, PLEASE PLEASE, FINISH THIS STORY. It's sooo good. Love everything about it. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmover 11 years ago
Hate shanky soul sucking bitches!!

Man did you hit a sore spot with your depiction of the wife. It was SPOT ON.

The bitch damaged the dude and was still picking over the bones!!!! WTF!!!!

The sad part is that art imitates life. Seen a whole mess of dudes screwed up and embittered by c**ts like that. Those types give all women bad reputations and makes the "Clean up woman's" job ten times harder if not 100x.

Can I get a witness up in here????

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
LOVE, LOVE, LOVE IT

I can't wait for the next chapter, I've already read this chapter many times.

Miss_RomanticMiss_Romanticover 11 years ago
My Favourite

I can't stop reading this chapter or stop imagining what is going to happen in the next chapter. Love Deacon and Skye.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
UPDATE

Please I love this story

chocolatepink2011chocolatepink2011over 11 years ago
Update please

Please update just found the story and I am hooked!!!your writing is amazing

Missy2330Missy2330over 11 years ago
Update

I love your story...please update soon!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
I challenge you

I challenge you to write chapter 3,4,5,...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
More PLEASE!

Stumbled upon the story. Please continue. Really like it.

black_maestrablack_maestraabout 11 years ago
love this one

when time allows you, pls continue. there are not that many werewolf/shifter/non-human stories featuring black woman and white guys... so pls keep adding.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Deacon and Skye

Can you please update this story. Im really intrigued by Skye's character and her unpredictility. I want to get to know her more. Begging here.

trubblemakurtrubblemakuralmost 11 years ago
I'm sad

This is not completed. I hope you come back and finish. Unless you published it somewhere.

chocolatesistachocolatesistaover 10 years ago
yes its so good

please we all want more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Great start. Definitely need more.

Writing is very strong. Story concept is unique. And the characters have stories to tell that I want to hear. Hoping there will be more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
wow

I sure hope that sometime you will finish this story. We written good creative characters and keeps you wanting more.

MusicLuvaMusicLuvaabout 9 years ago
Please update.

Would really love to see an update to this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Just...WOW!!!

This was explosive! I felt the hunger for Skye that Deacon had. Skye, the bad girl, was knocked off her game so far, it had her shaking up a storm running home to regroup. Never had she experienced such intensity. Deacon was feeling it too. It's a shame Sarah's hooked on him too (her boy toys couldn't deliver...possibly?)

I know it's been years since this was written, but you are a fantastic writer leaving a major cliffhanger after such an intense display of rawness. This story may be a few years old, but it would be great to update this. I read it as if it was written yesterday and still works. Humbly, I ask you to finish this rare, yet addictive literary treasure.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Please!!?

Oh please, you simply must finish this story. It is captivating.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Keep going this story is intriguing thanks for the tidbit.

Hope you continue to let us travel with these characters. You have captured our attention. Please continue, thanks

danoctoberdanoctoberabout 4 years ago
What a terrific tale.

Unfortunately, this last chapter to the story was posted 2012 with nothing coming from this author since. So much potential for other chapters. ☆☆☆☆☆

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Hmm! Makes you wonder, why an author would drop such a great story. Hope she is o.k.

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