by datura48
Like reading instructions to assemble a piece of cheap furniture.
I loved the story but to get a 5, he would have taken her ass the day of the fishing trip. Also, the Mother's body was never described. I still gave it a 4 and I was thoroughly enthralled.
She is raped for 5 weeks and never tells? She says no and rather than going away he rapes her without consequence? She's not even angry? She is betrayed by her sons best friend and it's ok?
Emotionally, this was crap. Even the author couldn't spin it so he made this as boring as possible.
The part about fucking her on the bed with the dad next to her isn't very believable but otherwise the build-up is super erotic and works really well
Your stories sometimes just end..... don’t leave me hanging .... but great job!
Good story. Hot, without being too taped. Well written.
I liked this story much more than I expected, but thought the ending was thin and rushed. I like the theme of a wife and mother losing control of her pussy to a young stud. Add the oblivious husband and, wow! I would have wished you added more humiliation for her by letting her son, Andrew, know she was a whore for his friend.
the whole thing about the catatonic husband is unnecessary and detracts from the story...it's not believable.
it was a hot story, it would have been better if andrew has seen them together qnd decided to join in