by EarlytoRise
I enjoyed the story very much and relate to the emotion and feelings.
You are a very good writer. I usually skim stories until they get to the good parts but yours was so personal that I could relate and read every word. Thanks.
Terrific writing, good editing with a pace which was slow and deliberate and appropriate to the shyness and self-doubt of the main character.
The physical acts unfolded slowly and were described with just enough detail.
This story deserves more chapters.
This stood out from the mass. Well-written and credible. I certainly hope you continue in this vein.