by Tigerstretch
Yay, another Tigerstretch story! I haven't even read it yet, I just want to express my excitement at having a new story to enjoy.
A great story as always.
I particularly appreciated the mention of the airpump because even though it is a story, fantasy, etc. the part of my brain that thinks about safety is appeased by mention of something that says, "Yes, I thought about how this could work safely".
So, thank you very much for another interesting story.
This story was a lot of fun - the second time I read it. Imaginative, with vivid descriptions and good tension as to what was going to happen next.
It's the tension that made it almost unbearable the first time, though. I had a sense of dread all the way through, that something terrible was going to happen underwater. I understand that the risk factor was a big part of the kink, but I almost wanted to stop reading.
But what kept me going was this: I *knew* in my heart that if Noemi were to get into grave danger, the *real* mermaid from the beginning of the story would appear and rescue her! :)
this is so romantic and sweet and so hot and passionate at the same time!! i love it! what a great story :)