All Comments on 'Mermaid's Peril'

by GadenKerensky

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missvixen555missvixen555about 2 years ago

Beautiful… to be taken this way, surely the most heavenly way to be taken.

WhiteClaw69WhiteClaw69about 2 years ago

I would fucking love a second part to these two please!

MattBsb500MattBsb500about 2 years ago

I absolutely love this!!!

I need more Cecaelia and Mermaid action in my life! the people need more tentacle sex, and mermaid with working mammal parts (personally I would've had the Mermaid have a butt hole on the back side of the tail in the butt region you described, I'm not sure if your mermaid anatomy as you described it has a waste hole at all...) but overall Hot writing! suspense surprise, action, understandable characters, lesbian action, little bit of BDSM, breading kink, reluctance, I really love your mentioning of the tentacle suction cups doing their thing and causing pleasure (lot of tentacle writers forget, or don't add it)!

great story and writing and use of select more sophisticated words that didn't seem forced!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I hope you make a second chapter to the story

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

bless you for understanding how fucking hot suction cups on tentacles are… 10/10 most criminally underrated element of tentacle kink but i LOVE it

this is really well written too, i like the way you describe things! definitely saving this one///

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I’ve returned multiple times to this story. Incredibly hot and beautifully written. 10/10

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