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- COMMENTS
Anonymous11 days agoWell, Casey44, Rimmerdal, Ruttweiler and alan_dee, as they say, you can't please everyone.
But a rating of 4.27 after 258,100 readers tells me that MOST people liked the story just fine, which leaves me thinking your taste can be found far from where most people have theirs, and I suggest you get an enema to rectify the problem.
Where are your stories to show us all how they are done? Oh, none of you have posted here?
Maybe you're all screenwriters for Disney instead, which would fit, because lately they couldn't deliver a popular blockbuster if their jobs depended on it... oh, that's right. They've lost millions. Maybe that's why you all sound so bitter and critical, did you get the shaft?
Rimmerdal6 months agoDamn that was so disjointed and full of errors it was tough to wade through.
Made very little sense at all.
Ruttweiler7 months agoThe characters weren’t believable, so no point in going on.
oksideshow8594197 months agoYou are correct on your ending
The way you ended the story could go multiple ways you left at a doozey of a cliffhanger
(tick stock tick tock no time to dilly dally Mr. Saxton_Hart)
Anonymous7 months agoExcellent story. From the comments, I think a lot of people don't know what a 1% patch implies. And I didn't mind the ending at all, I rather expected it.
Kaeyo7 months agoA really good story until those last two paragraphs, then it really tanked. A very disappointing turn of events and ruined the entire thing fir me.
JBird117 months agoGood until the ending Derrick deserved it but I a!ways felt make her love with what she has done is a greater punishment
numbnutz497 months agoWhat a cop-out! Story was pretty decent although I hate the repetition of points over and over again. But the ending? WTF was that!
Anonymous8 months agoWhoever is your editor needs to start making paper flowers or gluing macaroni onto oatmeal boxes because they suck as an editor. I stopped reading when every other sentence was a simple, declarative sentence beginning with 'I'. That style not only puts the 'bush' in 'bush league', but it sets up a rhyme inside the reader's mind, which annoys, bores, and ruins a decent story. Didn't read; didn't rate.
Dumbguy699 months agoWhy would anyone try so hard to keep a cheating spouse. It makes no sense. Then no ending. 2 stars.
Anonymousabout 1 year agoYou portrayed him at opposite spectrum ends being physically big but being a push over and a wimp he goes years being a cuckold which already indicates he is already mentally broken and then ending with him being a killer, not a lot of endearing qualities actually you wrote him with none. That which makes a man, a real man are traits of virtue, honor, self-respect, and courage! Looking the other way, trying to ignore it or try passive/aggressive approaches is not only cowardly but also only makes things worse.
Anonymousabout 1 year agoThe marriage should have been over as soon as she fucked the asspucker the first time. What, are you waiting for the sperm to congeal in her pussy before taking her back? Pathetic.
Reader2021about 1 year agoLet’s see…..
Canada or Florida?
It’s 5 o’clock somewhere!
Enjoyed this Story 5⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
