All Comments on 'Merry'

Niecly done. Please continue to write. There is not such thing as too many good writers and the only way to get better is to continue to do it. Thank you for sharing this story

Nice quick development of character in a well conceived atmosphere. Especially liked the ending as it was not closed. Next time flesh it out a bit more and it will be excellent.

Wow you made me cum so good oohh u should write more