All Comments on 'Met on the Net Ch. 04'

by RedHairedandFriendly

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RogerBsGirlRogerBsGirlalmost 19 years ago
Well done...

You can tell you put a lot of thought into this portion of the story. A bitter-sweet ending, a twist... we had a warning of the ending with his cramp in his arm!!!! Actually this does happen in real life, so I hope too many are not put off by the ending!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
A Hell of a Cliffhanger

You certainly know how to get your readers screaming for more.

You also write a hot story. I've always said the female of the species writes beter erotica then the male. Great job. Ronnie W.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Loved The Story

Iloved this story as a lot of it hit home to me. But I have to ask......does he die? Or does he live and get a divorce? I gotta know!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
He dies with a bit of luck

Hopefully she might follow him.

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