All Comments on 'Metal Mistress'

This would be a great first chapter! Please write more.

It needs a sequel

I'm slowly trying to write the next bit, it is a little starting thing. But I've always had trouble writing follow ups. Hope I do it justice

This is a very good start and you must do more chapters please . If it was possible to buy such a robot ... . I'm curious what punishment their Mistress will creat and if Ellie and Talia will regret their choice ?