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SweetDesire427SweetDesire427almost 10 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Glad you liked it!

Gerard_JohnstonGerard_Johnstonalmost 10 years ago
LOVED it.

Outstanding! The writing is smart (really smart) and clean. Such great phrasing and pace. And I loved the names! Can't wait to read more of your work. Oh. Did I mention the sex? Yeah, that too. Congratulations on a wonderful piece.

rightbankrightbankalmost 10 years ago
smores?

nice.

thank you.

FarmerJGDFarmerJGDalmost 10 years ago
Very good

Very good story, well written and thought out. Enjoyed it very much, thank you for writing it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
RARE

Even among the best writing on this site Meteor Shower is a rare and special addition.

THANK YOU!

SweetDesire427SweetDesire427over 9 years agoAuthor
Thank you very much!

It is really encouraging to hear from people who have read this little story. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Amazing Writing

This is quite possibly the best story I have ever read on this site. Amazing job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
*le claps*

Loved this so much! Please write more like it.

OleguyOleguyover 9 years ago
Superb !

How nice to read a well put together story minus the so standard over sized sexual differences and gutter language and best of all written from the feminine viewpoint.

Magical sweet lady.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Love the ending, beautifully written, the stars were a nice touch.

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