by lily2009
I also enjoyed this story of yours. Being male, I rarely read stories in this category. It was exceptionally sexy & very well written. Look forward to more submissions. Thanks.
. . . sensuous writing I've read on Literotica. I could literally feel it.
Liked it a lot. You took me through a rollercoaster of emotions....turned on, fearful, turned on again, happy...sad. Bittersweet! Well done! Please continue to write. You are talented. Thanks.
It highlights the desires of so many young women, that first step into the unknown. But an experience, once pleasured, we seek to build on.
A well written story, keep your mind flowing, I for one would love to read more.
Soft, sensual, seductive. A beautifully crafted masterpiece of how a married woman overcomes her clumsy insercurities to fulfil her dream of making love to the mystical Mia. The sexual tension simply crackles as Lily and Mia finally reach the heights of ecstasy. Lily's gift for engaging the reader from first sentence to last leaves this guy gasping for more.
Outstanding story, I loved reading it. Please continue with this story as I can hardly wait to read what happens next. Do they stay together?
Wonderful story, I hope you will write another part to it.