All Comments on 'Mia's Complaint'

Wish I was not so shy back in those times. If I could fine a commune today I would love to spend time in a secluded place with some open minded folks.

and share they did. Now will this group be around to share Nude Day again next year?

Enjoyed your story. Good luck in the contest.

Think you muddled up their names.

The commune was all for nudity, but when he sees Mia swimming nude he goes all prude and naive. He should have barely taken notice except to admire a nice body, then carry on his day. No big deal. But his reaction is as though he was a teen seeing nipples for the first time.

Then should remember she was in a pool shared with whomever, so not likely to be squeamish at being seen.

Spoils your characterisation totally. Now instead of being experienced he is a 50 year old goggling teen. Weak.