All Comments on 'Michael'

One of the best written stories I have read

Bravo

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Excellent well written story

5 stars all day long

i really love your story

i hope there will be part two , well he mention about shibari/japanese bondage , his mother would become his bondage model for him

would really look forward for it , thank you

This one of the very best stories I have ever read.

A heaven full of stars not just 5.

I think she should take it in her ass the next time

Michael wants it, also a place to kiss tongue deep.

I'll be looking for next post.

Man, this is so well written. I love the voyeuristic peaks that he's "not supposed to see".....I didn't make it past page 4 or 5 and that's not because it was poorly written :)

Thank you all for your comments. It makes the many hours taken to write a story of this length worthwhile.

Will Leigh find herself tied up in even more knots, will Michael introduce her to Dom? I have an inkling, that Dom is pretty handy with her feet, for those with that particular sort of fetish. We will have to wait and see.

T.

This one of the most well written and erotic stories I have ever found, instantly making you one of my favorite authors. I look forward to more.

Great story, It is to bad you did not write more about Micheal asking his mother to pose for him nude. It would have been better if he was to draw her nude pregnant body.

astonishing what a brilliant well written story and so erotic, that is quality literature

Thank you once again for your comments, they are always read, the criticism taken on board; the praise, seldom deserved, but I thank you for it none the less.

T.

i was expecting her to fuck him in her stockings as that is what this category is about. hoping there will be a part 2

Seldom do I give five stars, but I would have given this one a ten!!! The thought that must have gone into such a long story by what is normal here. I was glad that things started happening sooner than later. There sure was a lot of fucking. Michael can make his mother cum a hundred times a day.

still waiitng do part 2 , btw..

As an artist myself who used to spy on my mother in stockings, this story is perfect. The way Michael’s mind flows while he made love to

His mother (wanting to tie her up etc) was so real. Nicely done

great story

Loved this story but you need to continue further and then bring Dominique into the story !!! 5 Stars

By far the best written story on here . Fantastic , well done .

A very well written story with an excellent build up to a truly erotic climax. 5 stars from me but it could have been even better. I hope you take constructive criticism as a positive for your next story, but your dialogue in the final stage was far too long. Nobody speaks like that and it took me out of the story. A purely phisical description would have worked better at the end. But one of the best stories I have read.

Best wishes

Dom

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