by Jabibilrous
A great story. The dialogue might have been a little forced for two newbie bi-babes. But the pace and tone were perfect.
Love to see a Part Two soon.
Thanks!
It was just... wow! Fucking A+! 5 stars! Hot and steamy!
Amazingly hot & creative first story! Well done.
Great story. Please continue.
Very hot. Deliciously kinky. A magnificent first effort.
Surely time for another story