All Comments on 'Michelle and Ricardo'

Love it so far. I basically love good stories. It doesn't matter if it has some similarity to Seven Days. A good story is still a good story

REASON I ASK IS BECAUSE I REALLY ENJOYED THE STOREY N IM DYING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS WITH MICHELLE AND RICARDO

Please finish the story

Hope the next chapter is out soon.

(Sorry, I tried to send a comment via my phone and it came up blank. So one more time...*embarrassed smile*)

I do believe that you have a good story here. My only advice, as humble as it is, would be to make sure you keep your characters as destinct and unique as possible so that they remain seperate from the "Seven Days" characters. Share the details of their individual quirks. Avoid moving forward on assumptions (assumptions mainly associated with the other characters like she's a "good" person and inexperienced), give us the whys. That's what is going to make the destinction. I look forward to reading your next contribution.

~ABG *kisses*

This is a nice little piece of fiction. While there is room for improvement in terms of character development, its engaging. Please don't worry about any similarities between your story and Seven Days. That concept is not new. Harlequin Romance has dominated the industry on that front along with other storylines well before Soular, you or I came along.

Keep writing and thanks for taking the time to do so.

Plainshoneybadger

I loved it. More please!

I like it, please keep going!

great....cant wait for next part!

Great story I can't wait to read more of it please post soon :-)

for we readers are looking forward to your subsequent chapters to this great story!

and a long courting period. TK U MLJ LV NV

Well?.... you can't just leave us hanging like that. LOL!

Great start! UPDATE SOON, PLEASE!!

Where the hell is the rest of the story/ chapters? I need more, update soon please.

Pleaseeeeee continue this story I love it!!

just yuuuuuum!!!!!!!!!!!

Please update

This can't be the end

You should update this story it's been like a century know

I loved the premise but it could be tighter. One of the first things he tells her is that he wants her body but then gets upset when she repeats it. Then he says he has no patience but the chapter finishes with him saying he's a very patient man. And it's a bit odd for an interracial piece, she lists her dark skin and "crazy hair" among the things that make her unattractive. Great potential, but could definitely be tighter.