All Comments on 'Michelle Pt. 01'

Read both parts. The couple of Michelle and Rob are truly sick people. Michelle is yet another wife who claims to love her husband but has obviously forgotten the meaning of the word. She is depraved with a fetish for black men and lesbian sex. She is taken to humiliating her husband Rob, out of "love"? She has become dictatorial in her relationship with Rob, denying him his rights in the the marriage while at the same time usurping more than her share of power in the relationship. If Rob was not such a sick minded SOB he would have recorded the two sessions Michelle held on line with her black lover as well as the session Michelle has in person with the two black guys in the house. Then he could show his love for Michelle by freeing her through a divorce, so she could pursue her fantasies. -- 1☆

Unlikable story unless you're a submissive wimp like most mc do on this category. He knew he was being set-up but oh well... now his slutty wife is a BBC skank and he will NEVER be with her again. Just kill himself now or kill her and her black lover, divorce is too generous. ... Just your average infidelity tale, no good characters, no redeeming quality in the storyline. Doesn't need a second chapter because we know that he isn't MAN enough to destroy his wife. 1 star

The problem with this is the lies:

She lied to her husband and arbitrarily decided to have an affair.

I don’t care how aroused a guy is, knowing that she cheated for her own pleasure would be hurtful and disrespectful.

How would she feel if her husband decided to cheat on her?

And since when is it ok for her to have all the sex she wants, give the best of herself to other men but deny the men she loves? Give him sloppy sixths or humiliating him by denying him sex completely.

Even if that was your kink, it would be incredibly hurtful to know that sex with you is pitiful and a chore. She only tolerates it, at best.

lol you said our sex life. you stupid little girl, you dont have a sex life ...hahahahaha

What a bullshit story, like wife doing all of this without even talk with husband and even with best friend

Jeez, another poor apology for a man. I'm all for fun and games that involve BOTH husband and wife equally. But this weak and pathetic arsehole is so cringeworthy, he makes me want to vomit. His cheating slut wife is cucking him, all without discussing and getting his agreement. Then SHE gets to fuck another guy on camera for HER sake (not his!) Plus she gets private time fucking her now lover. Cuck boy gets nothing! Not even allowed to cum.

This pathetic arsehole should contact an escort to come to his hotel room the next night, then zoom call his slut wife and make her watch him fuck the hooker! But just the first time. Then he tells her he's closing off the zoom while he fucks the hooker again for the next hour.

Has he no self respect at all? His manipulative slut wife wants to control him completely... and he agrees? Divorce the bitch.

"I was beginning to realize, my wife now controlled our sex life." - LOL, wives ALWAYS control the sex life, that doesn't mean that you have to tolerate them having lovers,and denying you even self-pleasure.

hubby is an idiot wimp, wife a cheating slut, both awful people. Hope the STD's are right around the corner for wifey. If hubby is stupid enough to touch her ever again, he deserves his share as well!

Boring! 3*

Good job, Jen

I realize its prob just fiction, but why would anyone find excitement or pleasure reading about a one sided relationship with no equity sexually? the wife is calling the shots and the simp cuck is just going along for the ride. No real man wants this for himself.

Loved it! We need the next part and more teasing about birth control.

A story about idiots, written by idiots for idiocy's sake. That is the poetic idiocy of it all.

What a complete waste of time. Real men do not appreciate being eliminated from their position as husband to their sole mate, so the ridiculous arguments of the leftist progressives wanting to undermine the social fabric of humanity can drop dead - literally as well as otherwise.

It is the useless writings of failures like this (author) that promote the disintegration and mayhem that allows old people to be attacked in broad daylight by teen thugs; allows random strangers to get pushed onto the tracks ahead of an oncoming train; that applaud the gang violence and looting of neighborhood stores by groups of youth willing to disobey the laws of decency.

PATHETIC

Whore wants cuck to watch her with stereotypical bbJ, Jamal.

Ok so as a story it’s hot for sure . As a real life situation it’s not normal to me or as man I know. Even people I know that swing , swap , cheat or even they fake a cuck type fucking. Usually that guy is doing it because he’s a serial cheater. The hooking up with a black guy or girl is very popular or any interracial for that matter. A former coworker let his wife get picked up by two younger supposedly gang members who took great pleasure it totally repeatedly fucking her white married ass as they put it . The fucking was hard ,rough and very verbally abusive. As they moved her from spot to spot in the hotel suite they held her hair as they walked her like a dog . At one point room service was bringing champagne and fruit . One was so hard fucking her up her ass they other told the guy your tip is cumming in her white married mouth if you want . They had her tell the guy he’s fucking my white married ass with his big black cock . The guy shot all over her face as well . He said her tss as me after was the dick was good but didn’t care for the sex talk which they said was all part of the fun no real meaning . She didn’t want a repeat but he did get her gangbanged in Europe at a sex club . To me no real love or respect for each other so why marry. They did divorce and she could never find a guy that knew her because her ex had a big mouth and bragged about everything. . Everyone liked her but didn’t respect her. Thought she was just a pig but really wasn’t and just that he pushed her to act that way on occasion to justify his cheating

if my wife ever did this i would set her ass on fire

Jen must be a woman and one sick fuck

Hey guys and gals I am taking a hiatus from writing smut for now. It seems I am a poor self editor and for the most part the only feedback I get on this website is hate speech. I wish those few readers who enjoy my writing would comment, but mostly it is constant negativity. So, for those who think I am "one sick fuck," well, I won't be submitting for awhile.

Oh damn you gotta be kidding me man, this is some top tier story on here. You gotta forget about the negative comments lol, they don't have anything to do with your writing, people just be hating on most stories under Loving Wives

Oh yes, great story. Thank you.

Badly written, error-ridden, nonsense.

As I have told others: One getting a hold of an editor is a chore. Two since this story I have started using Grammarly. But I appreciate that yes their were a lot of errors.

Fanciful imagination—but in reality, for many readers, disgusting.

Another loser wimp husband. Don't have a guts act like real Man or husband!

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ShortieJen!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

TORTURE MUCH???!

Lol

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