All Comments on 'Mick's Big Cus!'

by rick200

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Technicality maybe

One can NOT inherit anything from a cousin only from parents , grandparents etc.

submissiveMansubmissiveManalmost 16 years ago
keep writing

not shakespeare, but you should keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
another sissyboy

if the writer want women to be men,grow a cock.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

Good story...I wish something like that would happen to me!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

plese continue this story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Not Believable

The story unfolded too fast. The fact that the cousins french kissed in the club with all of their friends around made it unbelievable. No one is going to do something as taboo as that with other people around, especially people that know that they are cousins.

You should have waited until the cousin took her home before a move was made.

Take your time and let the story breathe next time. Don't Rush.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Cousins?

Cousins? Where's the incest?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Good story

It was a good story for your first try but it did unfold a little to fast. Keep up with the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Ouch

Hahaha Femdomed. I hope that won't happen to me.

-waterboy

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
This is stupid.

Spellcheck.

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