All Comments on 'Mick's Introduction to Real Sex'

I'm surprised that no one else has commented on this cute little story. I liked the idea behind it and that it had a couple twists. The writing was mostly good, although I felt like commenting since I had one or two (hopefully constructive) criticisms. I enjoyed the verbal foreplay between these two, but I think you need to sharpen it up. That's a tough task, but the language got overly verbose at times where something sharp and witty would've worked better. Continue with the theme of clever dialogue as I truly think it separates amateur writers from really great ones. Best of luck in your writing.

Tony

An excellent story, well written.

Good story, it had a good plot. Another romp in bed would not have been too much. I doubt if he spent many nights in the "accommodation", Sequels could involve her sister alone or in a 3some. Perhaps Mrs. Duckworth could let other horny women and her lady golf partners know about her live-in fence=stainer.