All Comments on 'Microchips Ch. 02'

Please continue this story. There is a lot that can still be written about the two of them and their future together.

fantastic, loved it. Hope you keep going with this. so much fun to be had yet.

I'D LOVE TO GIVE YOU A 10 STAR IF POSSIBLE. LOVED YOUR STORY! WAS SO FUCKING HOT. GREAT IDEA ON THE MICRO-CHIPPED LINGERIE. I'LL NEVER FORGET THE TIME I SHOWED UP AT A GOOD FRIENDS HOUSE NOT KNOWING SHE WAS HAVING A LINGERIE PARTY FOR SOME SEXY LADIES. A FRIEND OF MINE AND I TRIED OUR BEST TO MODEL SOME OF THE SEXY OUTFITS AND LATER DEMONSTRATED THE USES OF THE TOYS THAT WERE ALSO AVAILABLE. DAMN WHAT A NIGHT WE ALL ENDED UP HAVING. I WOULDN'T TOUCH THE MARRIED WOMEN AND THEY UNDERSTOOD. MY FRIEND TIM TOOK GOOD CARE OF THEM!

i echo all the comments - better than 5 stars!!! and, please keep the story going. very erotic, sexy. great characters and story line. what else is there?!!!!

Your writing skills and perfect! I truly felt like I was there enjoying it myself! Can't wait for more chapters!

Good scribin'

Good story!

Good proofin.

Thanks!

Minus one for disallowing anon. hat can I say?

detail and sexy story. Loved how you developed him from Tanya over to Alex and then wrote Nat to fall for him even without the stimulation. ;) Great details on the sex and what a buildup. Easy 5.