All Comments on 'Mid-Valley League Swim Finals'

This is so well crafted and written and so insanely hot, it cannot end here! Please, please more....!

Thank you!

Such a well written story, it had the right amount of sexual tension that led to the Mother finally getting to take her son's virginity. The other parts of the two women getting to build up his sexual fantasies were just perfect. I wonder what his neighbor is going to do now. Looking for more chapters!

This was a great story. Please continue this story line. Would love to read what you come up with on Carol & Debbie.

Great story! The buildup was great and the delivery was worth the wait. I’ll add you to favorites when I’m on a device that I’m logged into. Keep writing!

Loved it! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Only problem I had was, too many players,

MOM and DEBBIE would have been enough.

But all in all ,very good job.

..THANKS..

Great story, easily worth a 5* award. Looks like Debbie's next! Hopefully.

This story had me on the edge of cumming almost the whole time reading it. Please continue this story!!

Please continue. 5 stars. *****

Great story. Was Coach Richards old in 1971. He was really old when I swam for him. He was a good coach.

I think mom should have concentrated on her pussy when training Honey Baby. It was his very first fuck, and the first incestuous fuck between mom and son. There should have been a little time of learning how to fuck a pussy in different positions instead of going straight to the ass. An ass fuck on the first fuck isn't likely to happen in real life.

I grew up in Granada Hills. Hearing all of the San Fernando Valley locations brought back so many wonderful memories. I would enjoy a sequel, involving his friend the swim coach. Thanks for the story.

another chapter

Really enjoyed the step by step approach to the inevitable ... good fun along the way too

I love the setting and characters; the MC getting involved with all the different women was a nice suprise, something I hope to see more of in a future chapter, hint hint. The way you write his sensations of swimming and being in smooth clothing was so good. I like the taboo of what he did with his mom but Carol is something else; I'd love to see a slow seduction of Ryan, going from swimming naked in the pool for her pleasure to something like massages or something else mid-tier intimate, to sex in the pool. Great story, can't wait to see where it goes!

Great story. Looking forward to more chapters. What happens next with Debbie? What about their panty shopping trip? More with Carol and then getting intimate. To not feel guilty she takes him home to her girl friend.

Awesome story. Very verywell done.

Wonderful story! There is no love like mom's love.

Clever.

Excellent story. Needs a second part for summer into college

Excellent story