All Comments on 'Midnight City Ch. 03'

I was wrong about EVERYTHING! Holy crap-on-a-cracker! Poor Ethan. Perhaps IC can suggest that his uncle talk with Ethan...the kid needs some help...it'll also keep him from getting into too much trouble.

You've done it again, WW. Bravo!

(Sidebar- it would be cute if you write a short vignette having Carole solve a 'crime', like "the case of the missing binky".)

Thanks for all of your hard work!

Sincerely,

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... and some had the basic motive for the killing. I don't think anyone got the cluuuuuues (a.k.a. Easter eggs) that led to the solving of the crime. Oh well, you're hearing it here first: the next stories may be a lot more shrouded in mystery and drama...

(P.S. I liked the idea about Detective Carole solving a mystery; we'll have to see what happens there... :o) )

What a tragic incest story. It’s not like you WW haven’t touched on this theme. Don having both his mother and sister, Todd having having his mother, grandmother and aunt. Laura and her sister. Which brings us to. Cindy. I feel she wants to be a mother. Every opportunity she gets she feeding, chabing, playing with the children. He wants almost to be a mother BUT she is afraid she can’t do it emotionally with someone to love her and be her equal partner. She can be submissive to get that love but is really a top instead of a bottom. I think Jenna has burned the bridges between them, However as the song says “ fools rush in where angels fear to thread”. Wait in see

*****Every chapter get better and more interesting. This is just some excellent storytelling. Thanks for sharing.