All Comments on 'Midnight Dreams'

All fathers and daughters should experience such uninhabited sex.

Daddy-daughter stories usually don't appeal to me, but this one did. You handled the topic with great sensitivity and taste.

Much like the plot of a good horror film, your words kept building the heat and the passion, but at the same time, slow-played it to an amazing finish. I thought they were going to fuck during the first screening of the movie, but it was great how they didn’t, and the passion and tension between them just built up more. Very well done. 5*s plus!

Long enough to develop characters, but not drawn out; the plot is always moving forward. A sequel would be fantastic!

Much better than most of the nonsense in this section of the site today.

Very well done, autoplot! Slow build-up and tension. Loved the dilemma and the struggle within the dad. Very deep and emotional. I truly loved the story within the story theme. Keep it up! 5 stars, easily.

Sometimes a story has a feel for the characters, well at least for pumpkin. Dad was just an extra.

Well written

I absolutely loved it. the fact that I'm even bothering to write this review is a testament to your writing skills, as I never write reviews. I loved the almost nostalgic and cozy atmosphere that was seeped into this story. I would love for you to continue this in someway. I just loved these two!

I also loved how she calls him Dad instead of daddy. nothing ruins a Father/Daughter story more than the overuse of "daddy" and the cutsy pappa's girl bullshit, because with her calling him Dad it emphasizes their blood relation. while "daddy" is used in roleplaying and as such loses a lot of it's impact.

I really appreciate the feedback. I have been thinking about writing another installment. If I come up with something new to say, I definitely will.

This is the way a father and daughter should take their love to the next levels

Is this a real movie, or based off a movie?

It’s not real. I made it up. Unfortunately!

So well-written, I could suspend reality and really feel the suspense of their relationship. I also loved the way you described their body-language in a way that read almost the same as dialogue.

Yet another wonderful story. Keep on writing.

I've been reading stories here at Literotica for well over ten years. My rating system has always been the same - if I like it I give 5 stars...otherwise I give it no stars at all. All, or nothing at all. I think this is the first story I've read here that I wish I could give 6 stars to. I truly loved it!

It's weird that I have never commented on this since it's been in my daddy/daughter favorites list for a long time!

Love the story! 5⭐️