by HornyPup
Too much like rape, even though she seems to accept it. Is she being honest?
Silly comments - of course it's not realistic, it's fiction, and very hot too.
its a good story but idk why but i was laughing the whole time ...so weird .-.
I'm a little like the girl in the story-despite only being a C cup. When I lost my virginity it was to someone way too big-not 12 inches, but eight is enough. The thing is I didn't climax my first time and he was going at me for about ten minutes. The story is good and hot, but it's not realistic,
Not bad, but maybe include a dog in the story. Where as you are humping the young chickie, the dog is licking it all up. Not a speck of cereal left.
Not very believable. The girl turns up basically gagging for sex? despite being a virgin? despite being supposedly incredibly hot and knowing it? It's all a bit too quick to kick off and isn't clear who is seducing who. Neither character has depth or believability. It's a decent attempt, but the story should be driven by the characters, not the need to get to the sex bit as quick as possible.
I really enjoyed the pace of the story. I also liked how you didnt spare the vivd details as well. Anyways very hot story, would love to read the 2nd part.