All Comments on 'Might Just Get What You Wish For'

by Halcyon_Flux

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

I really enjoyed this story despite the fact I didn't like any of the characters! Pretty impressive feat. Also loved the popsocks reference. :)

NC22371NC22371almost 9 years ago
Teasing is not nice....

I was almost hoping that it was the girlfriend that she ended up with, after training her to dominate her.

Oh well, nice story anyways.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Beautifully crafted

It’s such a pleasure to find something on this site that is so well written. The submission thing really isn’t my specific kink but this was so well crafted I thoroughly enjoyed it anyway. Often the stories here are no more than a laundry list of physical behaviour whereas this had depth, style and emotion. I look forward to reading more of your work.

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