All Comments on 'Miguel's Breeding Bitch'

It was an ok story with a decent story line but had grammar errors. I am one of the volunteer editors for this site and it would be my pleasure to help you with your stories and maybe even help you turn a quick story into series.

Hey, You should proof read your stories better.. You had one hell of a good story but your mistakes kind of killed the mood for me.

What mistakes? Well, like using the wrong word, here or there. Like this line "his dick was as hard ANSWER it could get" - Where you should have said "his dick was as hard AS it could get".

Those kind of mistakes really killed the mood your story worked so hard to build up.

Does ehe get pregnant on the first fuck,or are there more? Preg risk sex is such a not topic, fucking like nature intended and riskig an unwanted baby! PLEASE MORE!

She could always take a morning after pill

I have written a part two called Miguel Breeds again. It's a bit more forced than this one.

Hispanic and Latinx aren't the same thing, jackass.

I love breeding just the thought of a girl getting pregnant because of me and now she's mine

Nothing you wrote makes sense, such as this pearl: "All these Mexican girls are too easy to get or won't give it up."

Well, which one is it???

This is some lame crap you didn't even read yourself.