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She paid her bill and left the café, wandering off to get her daughter.
And it felt more than ever like there was so little time left...
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- COMMENTS
tinfoilhat6 months agoIt's a sign of a good author when he draws you into the family he writes about. Making the reader experience the emotions is a great skill. The chapter ending with Miranda passed is a prime example of this.
taco108510 months agooh,my frikin goodness, what an ending. love what you did right there 4 years earlier... wow... thanks for a great read.
Jvito10 months agoLove the chapter, nice to get to know the other posse members a little more. The ending about Miranda was awesome and heartbreaking at the same time, fantastic . My only wish was that you would have included another flashback into how Mike & Karen came to be before we get lost in the Alex & Alexa universe that is gearing up.
Waiting anxiously for the next installment! Keep up the great work.
quekolis10 months agoThe story has yet gotten to the point where Karen and Michael finally fall in love, hopefully that will be provided soon. It been a great set of stories.
jimmy_logan10 months agoWhy did miranda leave...?
Can u make a series about Miranda and Jonathan ? How did she capture his heart ? And what made her leave them ?
