All Comments on 'Mike & Melody Ch. 05'

Well written, good dialogue, but I personally would like more sex.

Write more you have such a hot story going on and so much more to keep writing about now that there is an extra cock to play with all of that hot pussy.

Very good story. Wish you would keep going.

Great story, strong story line, very few grammatical errors. But I do have a complaint. The use of three names that begin with M. It might just be me but when I get immersed in the reading sometimes and depending on the story / author I forget, was it Mitch, Melody or Mike, or Bill, Bob, & Betty, or Jim, Jan & Joe. This comment is just a suggestion that may help readers enjoy the story more, please try to breakup the primary names of the characters. While I have sited you, please take no offense as other do this as well. Since this was written back in 2015 I don’t suspect there’ll be anymore chapters. But thanks for a great read.

I'm reading all of your stories. I like them all. Keep writing. Thanks.

Liked it until it became apparent that Mel wants to screw other men…

After reading all 5 chapters , i thought the story was very good , nicely paced very erotic , but it seemed that the story did not follow on from previous chapter lots of loose ends , what happened to the lad doing the gardening , and how did Mitch come into the story , what happened to Linda also what happened with Emily, i think you spoiled by trying to add to many people into the story , mayby less people would have allowed you to add more content to plot lines as a whole , but thats just my opinion and i have not written any stories myself so i guess i have no write to critique your work , but thank you for your time and effort and i still gave it 5 stars .

An enjoyable and exciting story. It needs about 17 more chapters to flesh it out a little.