All Comments on 'Mikey and the Chickadee Ch. 13'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Ugh, how dare you update us with a short chapter. Haha. Well written, as always! I’m interested to see what happens between the two. I need them to fully dive into a romantic relationship!! Keep it up (:

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Slow burn

I believe at the beginning of this story you warned it is a slow burn. Well, I'm just about combusted. I cannot wait for these two to light each other afire. I can't wait for them to get it on. Such wonderful writing.

o2byoungo2byoungabout 6 years ago
Sharing my thoughts

As one writer to another, I know you have more followers than I, but all of them are encouraging. There are only a few stories that I am following, and two of them are yours!

I love comments, and I'm sure you do, also. Comments are fuel to keep us going, to try and pump out that next chapter, to keep our readers wanting the next installment, and I'm waiting for yours, as my readers are waiting for mine. I wish I could write half as fast as my mind creates! Kid, your writing is awesome!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Can't wait for the next chapter

Such an amazing and beautiful story.. the best one I've read here so far. I usually don't post comments but I just felt I had to write it this time. I'm really looking forward to reading more of the two of them

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
I bought the book....

Ok, so here is how ridiculous I am... I have the ebook. Yep. Bought it. But I get a happy little twang every time I see a chapter post and stay up late reading it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Beautiful!

I love the tender awkwardness of these young men and how their story is unfolding. You're a talented writer. I hope you make this a book. Gorgeous storytelling!

MrsgnomieMrsgnomieabout 6 years ago

How do you buy the ebook?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Love it

I love your writing style, and I love how you're feeding us this story in little chunks! I know the book is out there, and I'll definitely buy it, but there's something nice about getting it in serial style, and anticipating when you'll post the next installment.

I love the deep complexity you've given your characters. It's a much more engaging read that then usual cum-fests that you find here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

The ebook is available on Kindle for a very reasonable price. I bought it after I finished it up here. It was even better the second time around. Shout out if you know if he posts somewhere else or writes under a different name. Love this author.

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Just someone who loves to write. Originally from Boise, Idaho. Now living in Vancouver, British Columbia. So glad to hear that some of you are enjoying my stories. Follow me on twitter/instagram: kid8oise