All Comments on 'Miko's Mountain'

Very enjoyable read. Very nasty sex. Thanks for sharing

I thoroughly enjoyed the story. I was hoping for more when I reached the end.

The tension was excellent. The romance these two fell into, was healing. You described the fight or flight scenes very realistically, with non-super-human blows to the body which hurt but only temporarily incapacitated the particpants. Nicely done. It felt real.

Would love to see this story expanded into a longer one.

Thank you for writing and sharing.

Spyauth

Excellent story. A straightforward, believable plot, with two well developed characters.

All of that delivered almost flawlessly. Very impressive work.

Thank you for this story. Really enjoyed it. Great to read something different. Marie.

That was awesome. It truly was a great story. Please keep writing, I loved it!!

Well composed, plotted and written.

My admiration is yours.

Great story!

5

Captivating

You wove a fantastic tale and presented it with great skill. 5* seems so inadequate as a token of gratitude.

Dear Author, Another winner! You are a very good writer. Another five and my thanks.

jntiques/john

With this story, I have now read your entire collection. I love your style!

Great storytelling and a great story to tell. Well done.

Excellent story! I do wonder what the mother thought about this situation.

...a couple of your stories for light relief following the sometimes grim reality of Becoming Who We Are. I found to my surprise that although I had read this story before and given it five stars, somehow I neglected to leave a comment (perhaps I read it late at night and forgot to comment the next day). So for what it's worth, Van, I really enjoyed Miko's Mountain. Keep 'em coming!

You have some of the most awesome women in your stories. And Miko should have thrown him off the cliff. 5 stars.

One heck of a good story. "Do you want your life to end, or do you want the life you've been living to end?" Picking one best line, that's it. 5, right there.