by KAnneMeinel
Really sweet... really hot... Your story actually inspired a trip to REI today ;)
It's so nice to read a story that is realistic rather than just sex scenes with a couple of connecting sentences. You describe our lives as they are. While your sex scenes are great, it's your reality that makes them so. I look forward to more of your great writing. Thank you.
Christie
So full of passion, desire, raw lust and pure love. I love how you write, leading up to a sensual yet hot sexual scene. You truly described how two women make love and fuck all at the same time. That's what I have with my woman...you described how she and I make love and fuck all at the same time. Thanks for writing this and hope you continue!
I was very turned on. The pacing was perfect, everything was just perfect. The descriptions, the build-up. Beautiful. It was very beautiful.
KAM, I was impressed with the quality of your camping tips. Sensible and safe and having fun. This story is another example of the your superior writing skills.
It amazes me how many other writers get the even the simplest details wrong.