All Comments on 'MILF and Cookies Ch. 02: Strawberry Milk'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
excellent sequel

Good clear story well told Do keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Anon

Great story! I really like this series, although I do feel a little bad for Penny seeing as how she isn't included in all this naughtiness, but who knows, maybe she'll get included in a future chapter. This is insanely good. Keep it up!

ejherbieejherbiealmost 8 years ago
Loved it

Loved both stories, hope you continue. One of the best stories I've read on this subject.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Very nice

Two good rounds of editing and this would get a 6

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Brilliant!

i absolutly love this series and am excited for future chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
More please

I hope you plan another couple chapters

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Good First Draft

This is a good story but needs serious proof-reading/editing. There are numerous typos, use of wrong words, and complex, convoluted and unclear sentences. Additionally, where are the babies. Nancy goes to the mall without her son, Is there a babysitter and, if so, where is she when they get home? Karen visits another lactating mother but does not bring her child. That is very strange behavior.

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