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Click hereAfter long minutes, I lowered my pace and, eventually, stopped completely. Elena's body took longer to recover. When her body no longer trembled, I dried her and then lifted her body and carried her to bed. I laid her down gingerly and went back to the bathroom to dry myself.
On the way, I heard her mumble, "You are very strong. Your amazing organ filled me like never before. It was heavenly! I love your body..."
I came back, lay by her side, and said, "Darling, your body hypnotizes my organ. After tasting you once, it wants a repeat. I am not sure I'll be able to hold it off for long."
She grinned, "I think my pussy craves your fantastic dick no less. We can eat breakfast and then let our genitals fall in love again."
I like the story but your dialog needs work. No one says “your body hypnotizes my organ” or “let our genitals fall in love again.” The language is much too clinical.
“Honey, I wanted to feel you when we reached Paris. I was done with Dad. You are caring, funny, extremely handsome, and make me feel good. I want you. All of you! I do not care about moral issues. I gave your father the best years of my life and got nothing in return. I wish to start living. If you really want me, I am yours."
Gorgeous Elena wants to dump her worthless husband and take their son as her lover. I like where this story is going and look forward to the author’s treatment of this MILF fantasy.
Spyder23: I assume the three dots meant a change in the speaker, from the son to Elena. It was kind of confusing. And the son is the one who is 25. Elena is a very young looking 45 with, obviously, a very slim and shapely body.
Talldarkfellow didn’t understand your use of the 3 dots. You knew her age and were complementing her by saying she was younger. My problem is your use of language. Who says genitals? Definitely no one on this website. It’s not sexy or romantic.
A couple of errors prevented me from giving this 5*. A strong 4*, though. A second chapter should be written.
I enjoyed this first chapter IMMENSELY! I really liked the hesitation right before you wrote "25th" birthday.....excellent way for him to tell his 45 year young mother she didn't look even CLOSE to being 45......very clever and flattering! Mother/son incest is every bit as much of a turn-on for me as daddy/daughter is! I hope she soon after returning home she divorces her poor excuse of a husband and takes her son as her "husband", and they proudly go out in public as man and wife. I look forward to seeing how this evolves!!! Excellent beginning.....hopefully she is in her "fertile cycle" during this week and comes home with a baby beginning to grow in her belly! 5 stars, I wish I could give it more!!
To talldarkfellow: Please, read carefully - The son is trying to compliment his mother rather than state her real age!
My first thought when he mentioned how old she was turning was how fucking old was she when she gave birth?!?! lol Personally, I think it's hotter if he kept referring her as Mom instead of using her name. Anyone can be named Elena. He only has one person in his life named Mom. Four stars.