All Comments on 'MILF Cruise - Upgraded'

I love an older woman story in which the young man actually gets to hang on to his older woman. Easy 5 stars from me, and hoping for Ch 2.

Great Story

nice , thank you

Great story,

Hope to read a sequel.

Those to brighten a day.

Fantastic story! Bravo!

Great read! Looking forward to reading more of your work!

Exciting and very well written. I look forward to reading more of your stories. Happy New Year

A delightful read. Well done. Look forward to another story.

Nice. Enjoyed it

excellent more please

Excellent story, so well written. You developed the plot slowly, I like that, and the sex was a part of the plot. Well done, will follow you. Looking forward to more adventures of this couple.

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Enjoyed your story! Interesting twists and turns…

Very enjoyable reading. Love to read some more cruising stories.

You write very well. The characters are real and the story moves at a proper speed.

Just keep on writing. 5 stars.

Fun story!

5

A very beautiful and well written tale. Exquisitely sexy, yet warm and tender!

Keep writing!!!

A really nice well paced story thank you.

Being a man on the shorter side I appreciate the taller woman, shorter man situation. It is about personalities meshing, not how tall you are.

Well done. Didn’t need epilog. Don’t think that added any value.

5 stars!! I normally don't read long stories like this, but your story kept my attention and before I knew it, I read the whole thing. Awesome job!!

beautiful romance

Read at the start of the new year. This story of hope and love was just the right positive experience to enjoy,

Yeah. 5 stars. Saying more would be superfluous.

Wonderful build up loved the ebb and flow and the great ending look forwardx to more

Excellent. I enjoy older women/younger men stories, reminds me of my own work place romance after i left the British military and i worked at a nuclear power station in Suffolk, i had an affair with a tall curvy short haired blonde 20 years older than me, that was some 6 months.

Very well presented with excellent third person POV. Not a big fan of drawn out romantic “hank type” stories, but you grab my attention with some action, martial arts, of which I also studied for many years and I teach, humor and some interspersed complements given genuinely to an aAmazon goddess. 5*. Waiting on # 2

Great story. Hope more to come..

Excellent new Year story. Five stars just isn't enough. Thank you for it.

Heartwarming and sexy, thank you for a lovely time aboard! I thought it was interesting that the mutual masturbation came after the sex rather than leading up to it, but it was still an escalation - of perving. Very nice. And the Dimrill Stair to public fucking was a great addition!

A solid 5! Keep writing!

Exceptionally well done! You have great style, keep up the good wirk

A lovely mix of romance, love and sex, beautifully written.

I had a 40 year friendship with a woman who was 9 years older

Most excellent tale, well told!

Definitely one ofmy favorites. Well written, strong theme and likable characters. 5* would love to see a sequel.

Hoping for the next chapter.

Awesome story, love the characters and the sex was great.

Well done. Well designed and executed. Excellent pacing. Well edited -- which is such a rarity.

I loved that you gave him a martial arts background, which resulted in a hard sculpted body, but you didn't endow him with preternaturally huge cock.

This is a very very fine feel-good story.

5 stars.

very well done. I visualized Wanda Waddingham playing Tyra in the movie.

Delightful story

Absolutely loved it, for the second time. Still a solid 5! Keep writing.

Thank you for making Tyra REAL. I'm sick of these writers whose older female characters are described as: "...not changed a bit since he married her 35 years ago," or "...though she was 53 she easily passed for 35..." OR "...breasts were the same size and as firm as they were 40 years ago..." or "...despite having three babies, she was as firm and as toned...." Those are the empty calories of writing. This was a great, sexy, and well-written story. Welcome to the upper tier of LW writers. I've also noticed that your body of work is diverse and varied, thus belying a depth of creativity and understanding of the human condition.

Another great story. Thanks so much..

For me that was a different but really good story, loved the descriptions, loved the characters, they seemed to be nearer to life than lots of others on here , including mine.

It flowed, in a good pace through out.

A really well written story about relatable people. Good work😁

Nicely done well written I was expecting Missy at the end but there’s a couple of twists I would suggest, but it’s not my place, but overall fantastic story

Both of them were highly rewarded after the fateful turn off. They got to know the others intimately and sexually fulfilling …and now looks like a great future ahead of them

Nice story!

Thanks

Sorry I felt this was not up to the standard of the previous stories of yours I have read. ⭐️⭐️⭐️

A beautiful journey evolved for two deserving people

What turned a horror show into a life changing event was deserved by these folks

Easily 5 stars! Your stories are captivating and thoughtful

A great, hot, happy ending! We all need one now and then!

It was amazing couldn't stop myself from reading it and the fortune cookie outstanding

I think ITV’s a great story. Giving the dear John letter a giving it back to the writhed.

Well done, look forward to more

You have taken an often used Literotica story line and added several new plot twists and some really super erotic writing to create a story that stands far above any other cruise ship story I have read on this site. Really titillating writing - could not stop reading it. Looking forward to Chapter 2. Congratulations on a super story.