All Comments on ''Milf Next Door' Confronts Teen'

By the end of the 2 weeks Mrs Harper should be pregnant and Jacob on his way to becoming a father.

Please write a part 2

Charming premise.

Nice story. Could have used some dialog about what he enjoyed most about watching her. What he wanted to do with/to her. What kind of porn did he watch? Did he imagine doing those things to/with her? How often did he masturbate thinking about her? etc.

Before she took his cock in her mouth she could have asked him if that sounded good to him?

A little more foreplay/teasing would have been nice before cock entered mouth.

It's spelled COZY, not COSY. It's FUCKIN', not FUCKEN.

Nevertheless, five stars. A great first story.

Terrific, young and old getting exactly what is needed? Very Horny ! 💞

"until your ready" Use Grammarly

Great

*****HOT and sexy damn I had to look out the window just in case!! Great read good sex. Thanks for sharing.

Do us proud young man, a clever idea to cum on your window.

Not bad at all hoping for a part 2.

Everything comes to he that waits! Good story, but there's lots of possibilities for a second chapter yet.

super happy I found this site! Authors can actually put a complete sentence on paper..

sounds an awful lot like something from gonewildaudio...

@youngfella_69 Yeah, cause I wrote the original script on gonewildeaudio, this is a conversion of my script into a story.

I need Mrs. Harper in my life…

I did have to laugh, calling Mrs. Harper 'mature' in her 30's. This 75 year old gives it 5* anyway.

Good premise.

Sex is rushed. And lacks needed step-by-step details. Needs dialog about what he was thinking about while he watched her in her bedroom.

Three stars.

Nice story but less is always more. Check out some of my stories. They sizzle very slowly I'm told.

5 stars

Great fun. Very sexy and also the just the right length.

Totally agree with Lovecraft.. U little Ripper!!!

Lovely story. Lucky boy. Liked the light humor too.

What a gem this one is. Very very hot. Dirty talk was perfectly written and even better delivered, exclusively (yes!) by the huge titted Milf next door.

5 STARS from me.

How about another chapter?

One of the best written stories I have read for a while, great imagery and pace. Like every great tale there was an idea of what was going to come and it was delivered in a way that the anticipation was met with the pleasure of reading it and then the memory of it happening added to by the next equally anticipated pleasure.

This definitely needs a second chapter and in a perfect world and entire book as their relationship evolves and their lives entwine for perhaps a lifetime?

hot fantasy a fun story

If they share a window then they must be in the same building. 🤔

A fun quickie! Very hot. Loved the way Mrs. Harper lorded over him. Nicely, not demeaning or condescending. Would love several more chapters!

Possibly one of he hottest stories I've ever read. I loved the whole "mommy" talk from her. Subtly dominant, but sweet and sexy too!