All Comments on 'MILFception'

Quite an imaginative scenario, different from all the "magic ring" and "time travel" stories I've read.

The composition also meets or excels most Writers' Workshop standards and the dialogue between characters flows naturally without being stiff.

Well done. Don't make us wait too long for the next chapter.

MLJ

This is an excellent start to something that could wind up being quite epic.

Finally a slightly original idea keep it up

Great story! A creative story, with a beautiful, dirty-talking MILF. You have a good ear for dialogue.

I hope you get us a second part ... and that Ginny likes taking his cock up her ass -- J

My thoughts exactly, Stillness. Ginny is going to be part 3 or 4, but that's where I see it going.

This is so well written, I'm looking forward to reading more from you.

Your back I thought you were gone for good. Okay..... chapter 5?

idk if I'll go back to Okay... I have 5-6 more of these planed, like half a Beth follow up written, and want to write a series about Charlotte from my cheerleader stories. I don't know if I'll make it through all of those, but think that's going to keep me pretty busy for a while.

nice!

Love your work :) delighted to see new stuff popping up