by benrbb
****Slow start but once you got started very HOT and sexy read. Thanks for sharing.
A sexy, well written effort - unique in its May-December depravity, but certainly following the objective clearly stated in your biography. (5 stars)
However, I am truly disappointed in the year and a half since you wrote at the conclusion: "to be continued",
there has been no such follow-through. As a matter of fact, your works save "Tom's Summer Fun" have the same glaring faux pas. This is a bad habit, even if you are a non-serious neophyte, to develop if you want to
create a following, something most writers, even amateurs wish to do.
I hope this changes soon.