by POVscribe
Great story!!!!! I hope it continues with him continuing to nurse at her house. Will be great to have you explain how well they fuck after he empties her breasts.
Brings back memories of me suckling my wife....I surely miss those times. Hope there are more of them at home, without being distracted by the resturant
The tenses were all over the place, with past and present tenses used even in the same sentence. I couldn't get past the first few paragraphs because of this. Please improve your command of language, grammar, and style.
Good premise.
Sex too rushed.
Needed more delay and anticipation before he actually wrapped his lips on her nipple.
Better if his breasts weren't visible at first.
Why didn't she explore his fetish? Did he watch porn? What kind? Lactation? What did he like about it? Did he ever masturbate to thoughts about her? How often?
What did he imagine?
What thoughts were too much and he couldn't delay his cumming any longer?
Would he like to see her breasts?
Would he like to touch them? Kiss them? Suck the milk out of them?
Would he like to have her wrap her breasts around his cock so he could titty fuck them?
Four stars.